TITLE: Presenting The Setting
PAGE 1 (4 PANELS)
SETTING: NIGHT. An abandoned hospital sits isolated beneath a clear moonlit sky. The atmosphere is eerie, silent, and neglected.
PANEL 1 (Full-width horizontal panel across the top; approximately 1/6 page height)
A bright moon hangs above the abandoned hospital. The building looms in darkness, its broken windows reflecting pale moonlight.
PANEL 2 (Left half of the next row; approximately 1/6 page height)
One owl glide silently through the darkness, hunting among the trees surrounding the hospital grounds.
PANEL 3 (Right half of the same row)
Tall weeds sway gently in the breeze around the hospital. Nature has begun reclaiming the property.
SFX:
RUSTLE
PANEL 4 (Large panel occupying the lower half of the page)
Interior. An abandoned patient room.
An adult patient lies motionless on an old hospital bed. Their body is completely uncovered. Dust and decay surround the room. Moonlight streams through a shattered window, casting long shadows across the floor.
No dialogue.
PAGE 2 (4 PANELS)
PANEL 1 (Large panel occupying the entire left half of the page)
The patient remains motionless on the bed, appearing unconscious.
No dialogue.
PANEL 2 (Upper-right panel)
A fly lands directly on the patient's nose.
SFX:
BZZZ
PANEL 3 (Middle-right panel)
The patient's face twitches in irritation. A slight grimace forms as they react instinctively.
PANEL 4 (Lower-right panel)
The fly lifts off and buzzes away.
SFX:
BUZZZ
PAGE 3 (SPLASH PAGE)
PANEL 1 (Full-page splash)
Extreme close-up of the patient's face.
Their eyes snap open.
The irises glow a striking golden-yellow against the darkness.
No dialogue.
Focus on the Main Character:
PAGE 4 (3 PANELS)
PANEL 1 (Tall, narrow panel occupying the left quarter of the upper half of the page)
The patient's entire body is rigid with tension. Every muscle appears locked. Their face is twisted into a painful grimace.
No dialogue.
PANEL 2 (Large panel occupying the remaining three-quarters of the upper half)
Sweat beads across the patient's forehead. Their teeth are clenched tightly, jaw muscles straining as though resisting an overwhelming sensation.
SFX:
GRIT
PANEL 3 (Full-width panel occupying the lower half of the page)
The tension gradually leaves the patient's body. Their expression softens. Their breathing appears calmer, more controlled.
No dialogue.
PAGE 5 (4 PANELS)
PANEL 1 (Upper-left panel)
The patient lifts their head slightly and sniffs the air.
SFX:
SNIFF
PANEL 2 (Upper-right panel)
They inhale again, more deliberately this time.
SFX:
SNIFF
PANEL 3 (Large lower-left panel)
Close on the patient's face. Their eyes remain fixed on something unseen. Their lips barely move as they whisper a single word.
PATIENT (whisper):
Why lavender?
PANEL 4 (Large lower-right panel)
The patient slowly rises from the hospital bed. Their movements are unsteady, as though they are relearning how to stand.
No dialogue.
PAGE 6 (3 PANELS)
PANEL 1 (Large left-side panel)
The patient staggers through the room toward the doorway. Their gait is awkward and uncertain, forcing them to steady themselves against nearby walls and furniture.
No dialogue.
PANEL 2 (Large right-side panel)
The patient abruptly stops.
They stare intently at a section of wall. Their expression suggests they are focused on something beyond it; something the reader cannot see.
No dialogue.
PANEL 3 (Full-width horizontal panel along the bottom)
Close-up on the patient's face.
Their eyes remain fixed forward.
Slowly, they lick their lips.
No dialogue.



The way the MC's kiss consumes souls instead of flesh makes the horror feel intimate and deeply personal. What made u choose that over a traditional attack?